Nu har jag gjort en melodi som vi kan sjunga

Jag hade inget för mig såhär på lördagseftermiddagen. Så jag skrev ihop en låt. Tycker själv att den blev ganska bra och sådär, men ni får gärna komma med konstruktiv feedback. Melodin är lite svår att förklara i text, så om Hannes hjälper mig någon gång ska jag lägga ut den på YouTube så alla kan höra.

Here goes:

Yeah, request:
I want everybody as close to the stage as possible!
Get that speed, We're going back to the Heavyweight Jam
Let's go out for a walk to the other side
Get the sound, join the crew and you feel alright
No more fiction go back to reality
It's the message so listen and you will see
No illusion the spirit is what you feel
Get the volume tonite, you can make it real
I explain once again, we won't let you down
We can't stop going on that's what I pronounce
Faster. Harder. Axel!
We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!
We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!
We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!

Yeaahhh!!

Alrigh crew, enjoy this track, yes!
Aaaaaargh!
From Japan and Brazil to the U.S.A.
Let me ask you if there is a better way
I believe reminiscing the time we had
Don't you know we just want you are going mad
No bad rumors or charges could make us stop
Now the time has come we will reach the top
I explain once again we won't let you down
We can't stop going on that's what I pronounce
Faster. Harder. Axel!
We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!
We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!
We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!

Yeaaaaaaah!

Everybody shout!!!
(Faster harder Axel!)
Yes!
(Faster harder Axel!)
C'MON!!!
(Faster harder Axel!)
Once more 'cause you may need aid!!!
(Faster harder Axel!)

We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!
We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!
We're getting Faster, harder, Axel!
FASTER HARDER AXEL!
AAAAHHHHHHHH, Ihr seid ja alle wahnsinnig!!!!!